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Re: my mind wide shut

A virgin is a good thing...but u'd be surprised to how much u could write about sex and still be a virgin
Posted in Original Poems by Silent Medley on 11-20-2007

Re: WHEN I THINK ABOUT "GODS GIFT TO WOMEN"

&nbsp;sublimis wrote:it's kinda funny how you interpreted it, bekas when i was writing it i didnt see how it might have seemed to anyone buh me. this poem is just about a man who carry's himself like if he's god's gift to women. which is why god's gift to women is in quotations. when you fall so deep you never notice the wrong, and dats what im ...
Posted in Original Poems by Silent Medley on 11-20-2007

Re: MUST READ THIS!

so much knowledge, emotion packaged into so few lines....i loved the wording of this. U have a way with arranging words. Beautiful piece and beautifully written!
Posted in Original Poems by Silent Medley on 11-20-2007

Re: "Something Green in Her Life"

&nbsp;sublimis wrote:i agree with ajene it was kinda sad. buh at the same time it touched me and i enjoyed the read. you got a way with werds my man, kas aperently this has absolutly nuffin to do with grass lol, buh just the way u werded everything made me close to tears. expecially bkas i had a friend who felt the same about her pops too [[ if im ...
Posted in Original Poems by Silent Medley on 11-20-2007

Re: DAMN!

This for me started out as a poem but the more i read it seemed the emotion took over and over powered the poem so that it read more of a diary page than a poem. Again also with this poem i think it lacked detail. But that could've been your aim when u were write'in. But to give u an example of what i mean, you said ''Just thinking about this ...
Posted in Original Poems by Silent Medley on 11-20-2007

Re: help me give this a title.

From a poetic technical stand point...i thought this could've used more visual or better said u could've painted it with more detail...wit that said the emotion in this oozes out...part of me is where this poem is...but yea the emotion in this paints the confusion and frustration of wanting something so close yet so far....as for a title ummm how ...
Posted in Original Poems by Silent Medley on 11-19-2007

Re: my mind wide shut

This piece...i felt needed more in depth detail...but ironically at the same time i thought it didn't if that makes sense...almost like i was fighting myself on how i saw it. I guess the best way i could explain is that in some places u had detail that wasn't enuff for me (a personal thing) but then a just the rite spot u word something and it ...
Posted in Original Poems by Silent Medley on 11-19-2007

Re: WHEN I THINK ABOUT "GODS GIFT TO WOMEN"

I first thought this was just a poem with hints of ur own personal experience...but the further i read the more personal it got...and the more personal it got the more of what i was thinking as far reply'in didn't matter. Took me back to a love that hurt me more than any other love. Scares from that love will forever be apart of this person. The ...
Posted in Original Poems by Silent Medley on 11-19-2007

Re: Mind You

lol i had forgotten u replied to this...i'm truely surprised u liked this one so much...like i said b4 i thought u would think its to technical. U know at least the feel of it...i dunno lol....anyway thank u and glad u liked it. As for the other ones...i'll have to get around to type'in those up...i've a big procrastinator lately
Posted in Original Poems by Silent Medley on 11-19-2007

Re: Love Is Watching Us Pt. 2

The contrast of this one from pt 1 is nice...the style of write'in the format...and yet seem to perfectly mesh...tell homie he's nice wit the pen...took me back to when i could write this intimately....*sigh* i miss how i used to write...i envy part one and two....i suck as a poet and i'm putt'in the cap on my pen lol *edit* i forgot to say that ...
Posted in Original Poems by Silent Medley on 11-17-2007
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