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Started by WitOneVoice` at 05-30-2009 8:14 PM. Topic has 1 replies.

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   05-30-2009, 8:14 PM
WitOneVoice` is not online. Last active: 10/1/2008 3:00:52 AM WitOneVoice`

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amazed.
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in a daze... amazed... how i was brutaly played... by an inconsiderate man who was just a phase.... and yet i can't exit this unresolvable maze... because i was so intrigued that it became a craze... to the extent where i'm perplexed and i'm in a haze... to why i'm still attatched in so many ways... besides all the precious memories and beautiful days.... that keep reoccuring like espn replays..... and the worst part is i still have hope with praise.... that one day it'll work out like the rest of the cliches... which is the only thing keeping my heart together - like clays... trying with my deepest strength to continue with my life because reality isn't emerging with all these delays...
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   06-01-2009, 2:19 PM
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Re: amazed.
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I recently heard someone say that in order to get 'good', you have to start with good. The hardest thing to change is people. In fact, when you try to change people, you'll find that the only thing that has really changed is your frustration level. This is a piece that people can relate to. Nice write.
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