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   12-08-2008, 9:38 AM
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For Khloe
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Looking down at you,

I see God's Love and God's Light

I see perfection and all that is right

I see your father and I see his WIFE

I see the very reason I'd give my life

Looking down at you,

I see the sum of all our years

I see pure innocence and a few fears

 I see a future of uncertainty inside those curious eyes

I see the rarest of loves, which is the devil's demise

Looking down at you,

I see generations of faith and strength

I see an angel's reflection at arm's length

I see every thing that is wonderful in this world

I am finally looking at our beautiful baby girl

Looking down at you,

I see a joy I've never known

I see my lover's first born

I see the completion of our trinity

& As my tears begin to fall,

I see YOU looking back up at me

~For Khloe Lee~

 

Love,

Mommy


~Love is for suckers..and I'm too mean to swallow!~
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   12-10-2008, 1:56 PM
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That has to be ond of the sweetest things I've ever read. This is beautiful. Nice write. Nice write indeed.
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   12-12-2008, 5:31 AM
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Re: For Khloe
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Congratulations N.HThoughts, this is beautiful, its filled with a mothers love through and through, you've captured something that is abstract very well in these lines. Peace and blessings to you and your new family! On another note how you been?

To be sure, an ordinary passerby would think that my rose looked just like you--the rose that belongs to me. But in herself alone she is more important than all the hundreds of you other roses: because it is she that I have watered.


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   12-22-2008, 7:30 AM
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Hi there asIam..It has been a loooong time... but God has been good to me and my family... In one year, I got married, finished grad school, got pregnant, & had the baby...(it was a WILD ride!) for sure.... but all is well and I am happy! How are YOU? I was just  reading the Haiku posts we did....so much fun! Thanks so much for the comments on the poem, I was literally crying when I wrote it...(a super post-partum emotional time, I guess)...Take care!

 


~Love is for suckers..and I'm too mean to swallow!~
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   12-22-2008, 7:52 AM
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 K-JiO wrote:
That has to be ond of the sweetest things I've ever read. This is beautiful. Nice write. Nice write indeed.

 

Thank you so much...this is one of the most personal pieces..so I am glad you enjoyed it.


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