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Started by poetryflow at 09-02-2007 9:30 PM. Topic has 6 replies.

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   09-02-2007, 9:30 PM
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can't move on
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I thought I was over that obstacle
but I still see your face before I write
how is that possible?
poetry was always a healing place for my heart
like a hospital.
guess love got familiar with the image
and is still trying to score points like
its a 4th down scrimmage
My soul knows the situation is timid.
Guess the glare from a love so rare
was just that vivid
my craft misses the sound of your laugh
and hasn't moved out the past
and still places your smile in it
What if a part of me just doesn't want to believe we're finished
it tells my spirit that its just a moment in time
you can buff out the blemish
these words will cause the tears to blurr
cause love has no limits

I miss you....

Bottoms up Sunshine.. Love potion #9
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   09-05-2007, 10:30 AM
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Aye!!!! 4real i like your style! its like  you choose an emotion to describe and you go from there, love it! Enjoyed this read!
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absence of danger but is the presence of God"
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   09-06-2007, 7:39 PM
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I'm glad that you enjoyed this one as well..

Bottoms up Sunshine.. Love potion #9
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   09-12-2007, 9:30 AM
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loved_ed it...nice write pnl
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   09-12-2007, 8:48 PM
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nice flow

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   09-27-2007, 10:54 AM
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DAG!! SUM1...ANY1 DROP A BEAT 4 THIS ONE...IM FEELIN IT LUV..
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   10-18-2007, 2:10 PM
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i liked this! like the flow.... very sweet and kinda sad.... i liked this!


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