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   01-22-2007, 6:16 AM
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a little rough around the edges but a little diamond of angst nonetheless ( haha :P )
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//An all round act of contrition
hate was my ambition
and to judge was my nutrition
//loathing was my mission
coz loathsome i had as my condition
blurring up my vision
so loud i couldn't listen
//to join you had to have my permission
on top of an overpriced admission
the distribution
of odds all over the railway station
//f**k dispensation and absolution!
//i need a beautician
for my date with hate
even though hate had me raped
of a lust non-fissioned
//now i see
i'm on the road to perdition
//coz you see
my hate was MY PASSION
and i fell into love's trap
//now i am one of the fell!
coz i made the mistake
of falling in love with hate

2007 sum experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted

2006 spr i put tape on the mirrors in my house so i don't accidentally walk through into another dimension
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   01-22-2007, 7:34 AM
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Wow! In that one, you can feel the hate on the surface even though it's hidden. If that makes sense! Beautifully written. Also, the hate is deep underneath, but you can see it's head rearing out and going back in again in my opinion. Powerful piece! Im a fan

-Freelike


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   01-22-2007, 8:14 AM
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 blaise2 wrote:
a little rough around the edges but a little diamond of angst nonetheless ( haha :P )
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//An all round act of contrition
hate was my ambition
and to judge was my nutrition
//loathing was my mission
coz loathsome i had as my condition
blurring up my vision
so loud i couldn't listen
//to join you had to have my permission
on top of an overpriced admission
the distribution
of odds all over the railway station
//f**k dispensation and absolution!
//i need a beautician
for my date with hate
even though hate had me raped
of a lust non-fissioned
//now i see
i'm on the road to perdition
//coz you see
my hate was MY PASSION
and i fell into love's trap
//now i am one of the fell!
coz i made the mistake
of falling in love with hate

OKAY BRO THIS IS TIGHT...WHAT'S UP THO' YOU KNOW I WAS GONNA ASK....LOL




"By being good 2 the self, this person has in essence set a standard that we all must aspire 2 reach if we are 2 be a blessing to that individual" T.D. Jakes
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   01-22-2007, 12:27 PM
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u know i like. u have the potential of a great lyricist. get u some beats! ;)
Her is sooo beautiful . . .

u sexxy thang u! U SEXXY, SEXXY THANG U!!!
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   01-22-2007, 11:27 PM
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Free
yes! like a tsunami's origin haha

Boogie
*grins*
i wish it pertained to something in my life
i guess it does - but just aesthetically
thoughts RUNNINg through the head
(btw we still waitin on you - drop it like it's hott steph!)

you da bess queen
gimme some buttery (fuKKery) beats for disssssss! :P
2007 sum experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted

2006 spr i put tape on the mirrors in my house so i don't accidentally walk through into another dimension
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   01-23-2007, 3:28 AM
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(((APPLAUSE))) -you are just blaise-ing the board. I see you are in the zone.
The person you thought you were--- really was not the person you thought you knew. Life happens!
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   01-23-2007, 7:34 AM
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 blaise2 wrote:
Boogie
*grins*
i wish it pertained to something in my life
i guess it does - but just aesthetically
thoughts RUNNINg through the head
(btw we still waitin on you - drop it like it's hott steph!)

Shyyyytttt I'mma have to drop it like it's luke warm or something...got no inspiration Blaise :-(  I'm stuck.... :-(

Damn writer's block **kicking rocks** lol




"By being good 2 the self, this person has in essence set a standard that we all must aspire 2 reach if we are 2 be a blessing to that individual" T.D. Jakes
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   01-23-2007, 9:33 PM
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thanks miss LaLa
i'm really loving the Just Blaise!


you just takin a well earned break steph
take it while you can! :D
(bahaha @ kicking rocks - too funny)

2007 sum experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted

2006 spr i put tape on the mirrors in my house so i don't accidentally walk through into another dimension
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