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   01-20-2007, 3:54 PM
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here Free - by me from your hand! haha
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i'm too smart (dumbfounded) to even hint
i guess small (subtle) doesn't fit

all my plans and emotions
bottled like jam and waiting in line

but my arms (mind) were too weak
and my legs (lips) weren't awake

my mind (arms) wanted to hold
but my lips (legs) were not that bold

what kind of f**kery is this!?

am i a choker?
choking on a piece of string

destined to leave you (me)
and never meander with me (you)

maybe subtle (small) is too tight

2007 sum experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted

2006 spr i put tape on the mirrors in my house so i don't accidentally walk through into another dimension
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   01-21-2007, 10:23 AM
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Blaise! I really like that. It's complex, yet simple. All in the same token. I'm really glad that I could inspire someone. You keep writing your ass off. I hope to be like you one day when I grow up. Kindred spirits from a distant life we are kiddo.

-Freelike


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   01-22-2007, 3:42 AM
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Great(awesome) write, just blaise you are fire!
The person you thought you were--- really was not the person you thought you knew. Life happens!
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   01-22-2007, 4:16 AM
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 FreeLike wrote:

Blaise! I really like that. It's complex, yet simple. All in the same token. I'm really glad that I could inspire someone. You keep writing your ass off. I hope to be like you one day when I grow up. Kindred spirits from a distant life we are kiddo.

-Freelike


aww shucks, you mah dawg.
i'm only 20 - whatchu talking!? n if you younger than me then O M G you is way too floetry'd :P haha
thansk for lvn me!

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   01-22-2007, 4:18 AM
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haha, makin me smile Po! :D
 - n here's me waitin for more lessons on poetiquet - where they at!?
(i'm lvn "just blaise"   !!!)
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   01-22-2007, 4:34 AM
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blaise, I am taking lessons from you! what u doing up all early, Mr. 20?
The person you thought you were--- really was not the person you thought you knew. Life happens!
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   01-22-2007, 5:03 AM
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aww shucks, you mah dawg.
i'm only 20 - whatchu talking!? n if you younger than me then O M G you is way too floetry'd :P haha
thansk for lvn me!

Nah, I'm older. I'm 24yrs old. But you mah dawg though. You keep me inspired to write! I know that as you get older you will become an even greater poet. So as I always say...Keep writing cause your work is damn good!

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   01-22-2007, 5:58 AM
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that means ALOT! thanks Free
i guess we all inspire the OTHER in EACH OF US - its all about reciprocity (and a lil competition :P)
you bess keep writin too then! coz i'ma be right here

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   01-22-2007, 5:59 AM
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Hey Po  i guess i jsut missed you before
it must be like 6 in the morning or something crazy like that (i never see 6am over here haha!)
but yeah jsut a quick hello before i head off
HELLOOOOOOOO
haha :D

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fukkery . . . HA! i luv it
Her is sooo beautiful . . .

u sexxy thang u! U SEXXY, SEXXY THANG U!!!
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   01-23-2007, 9:41 PM
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this is dope! lol im definitely feelin this... somewhat interestingly twisted! i love it! lol



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   01-23-2007, 9:42 PM
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lol f*ckery funny...


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