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   01-21-2007, 10:51 AM
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"Emotional Phases(Checkmate)"
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Baby, it's not you

It's me

It's me

The one right now that don't want to be LOVED

See, it's appearance is still faint, yet I remember you speaking truth!

So I enter PHASE TWO

It was you, not I who left me

It was you, not I

Who gave up on we

Everything ain't always about me

So I made it about you

***, you the one I gave control, so submissive that I submitted every ounce of me

But with my feelings, you still dined at the table of deceit, making me know defeat

So defeated I became

See honesty's right in your face love!

But do you even know my name?

You know my EMOTIONS, but don't know my SOUL

So I guess we ain't SOULMATES

I hear echoes of "CHECKMATE" as you win yet again

Hearing my tears

I have to be exclusively excused for a moment as I deal with my vulnerability

See trying to figure it out, you made it all the more complex

Vulnerability, that is!

Till I entered PHASE THREE

I move as "King" takes his place

As-I, stole your spot

Get it?

Meaning!

I remove myself from the situation, while, still going after your heart

Hopeing one day , you may know love as it should be

Being unloving to me, means that you dont love yourself

So just let your emotions go and unbutton yourself

See I hear the royal court and queen of HEARTS screaming

Screaming possibly in my favor

As I'm the one 

This-time

Yelling

"Checkmate"

 

-Freelike

P.S.-I don't know where this one came from. I let my mind wonder on this one! However this ain't the final version, I plan to revise it. Enjoy!


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   01-22-2007, 4:30 AM
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Re: "Emotional Phases(Checkmate)"
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i am constantly amazed by everyone here!
all these thoughts, cascading around me

and Free, if i could only paraphrase your phases
i would count myself amidst the content
but i find it impossible for me :P , so i'll just point out my fav phRase :D

Hearing my tears

I have to be exclusively excused for a moment as I deal with my vulnerability


gosh this is... - ...  i could hear the impact of tears on the concrete
i could see my vulnerability!
i could feel you deal!
*grins* my senses are alive
i am amazed again *nods*

2007 sum experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted

2006 spr i put tape on the mirrors in my house so i don't accidentally walk through into another dimension
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   01-22-2007, 5:05 AM
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Re: "Emotional Phases(Checkmate)"
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Lol Blaise, you are a breath of fresh air because you're so vibrant, just as I am. I always appreciate the love you show me on this site. Yeah, the tears are real, yet they are not visible, fore my soul is the one that cries most times...lol

-Freelike


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   01-22-2007, 5:55 AM
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Re: "Emotional Phases(Checkmate)"
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oh its just my luck! my night is good! haha
i was just bout to head off to bed n here are some posts already YAY
ooh n i totaly forgot that i wrote somethign last night too
just something on a completely different tangent
just came outta me (i wouldnt say CASCADING coz it came out all wild! haha)

2007 sum experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted

2006 spr i put tape on the mirrors in my house so i don't accidentally walk through into another dimension
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