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   11-10-2006, 8:29 PM
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Can i please go back to when

i was so little and
insignificant

when there was no fighting and
i was just an infant

when everything was new and
constraints i knew not then

when living was so easy and
and death was non existant

when learning was my penchant and
the world was out there waiting

when a dollar was a million and
a day was but a moment

when the truth was universal and
my lingering thoughts were innocent

when my friends were just friends and
care free was what filled them

when there was just girls and boys and
everyone was sexually hesitant

when image was not everything and
my weight was not a question

when my lies were my undoing and
religion was my perfection

when burdens did not exist and
lovers loved with no hating

when crying was so natural and
and caresses were so impeccant

i am wishing a reliving and
courting when all over again

so let me go back to when
where i can do it over again

please

i put tape on the mirrors in my house so i don't accidentally walk through into another dimension
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   11-10-2006, 9:20 PM
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Love'd it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This deserves two snaps :-)
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   11-11-2006, 5:48 AM
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i came back to see if anyone posted any new pieces
-- my day off so what can i say... ya'll got me addicted "my every thought is youuuuuuuuuuu" (what is it with me and singing to day!?) --
and just got a delightful surprise!
thanks P
glad you LOVE'D it

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   11-11-2006, 6:06 AM
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I was captivated by every word!!!      


I AM EMPOWERED TO PROSPER & ANNOINTED TO WIN
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HEADED IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION...I CAN SEE THE LIGHT OF DAY!!
MODIFIED:::DIVADEVINE::
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   11-13-2006, 6:35 AM
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I love it Blaise...as always...!!!

Family is everything...so I keep mine close.
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   11-13-2006, 7:10 AM
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thanks for the love Divs n Ona

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   11-13-2006, 2:58 PM
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Yesssss  SIRRRRR!


"To Dare is to loose one's footing momentarily. To not Dare is to loose one's Footing! permenantly"






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   11-14-2006, 12:45 AM
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cmon tru!
what does cali's finest have in store
WE waiting on YOU girrrrl       :P

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   11-14-2006, 11:12 AM
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Man...Blaise...I feel you on this!!!  I guess we all get to this point at some time...with me...often...  :)  However, everything does happen for a reason...with time comes experience...patience...hope
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   11-14-2006, 11:17 AM
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 blaise2 wrote:
cmon tru!
what does cali's finest have in store
WE waiting on YOU girrrrl       :P
just 4 you Blaise..I got somethin 4 u sweetheart!
"To Dare is to loose one's footing momentarily. To not Dare is to loose one's Footing! permenantly"






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   11-14-2006, 6:34 PM
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Too true N!  and thanks for the LV
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well Tru (the flo fam's very own ErYkah  :P)          i'll be waiting!

in the meantime, you guys have to check this chick out Dondria. she is sooooo good!
http://www.youtube.com/profile?user=phatfffat

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   11-14-2006, 6:39 PM
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 blaise2 wrote:
Too true N!  and thanks for the LV
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well Tru (the flo fam's very own ErYkah  :P)          i'll be waiting!

in the meantime, you guys have to check this chick out Dondria. she is sooooo good!
http://www.youtube.com/profile?user=phatfffat
I won't keep you waiting...!!!!
"To Dare is to loose one's footing momentarily. To not Dare is to loose one's Footing! permenantly"






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