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   10-07-2006, 5:23 AM
Stacye is not online. Last active: 10/14/2006 5:18:08 AM Stacye



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Tell Me

Why must space fill this place in my heart?

Why must we be in separation to solve this distress?

When my mind yearns and my body craves,

what it deserves.

Why must we be speaking words,

yet not saying a thing.

Confusion fills these doors to my mind

As I try harder and  push forward

You withdrawl.

Tell me

Why?

Why is it complicated for me to love

When my heart was what I wanted to give

You didnt except

What was so precious to me

Should have been precious to you

Tell me

Why?

Never knew pain this great

I want to just bust out

Never contimplated death

before today.

I try to see past this day of confusion

Where Ive given up so much of myself

Only to come up with spare pieces of what you left over

Im stuck in this love alone

And I dont know where the ends meet

Or how to fill what has been lost

I keep trying to avoid this moment in time

When alone is where I stand

Looking into my apartment walls

where shadows of my reflection reside.

Alone

Chasing away this moment in time

I say to myself, "it's better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved before"

Was this love?

Tell me

When your memory only leaves burnt traces of hatred

If this is love

then

Tell me

Where are you?

 


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   10-07-2006, 5:35 AM
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WOW...I FELT EVERY WORD OF THAT....I'VE BEEN THERE...I"REALLY" MEAN THAT....BUT THERE IS LIFE AFTER LOVE ...  BUT I  CAN HONESTLY SAY I  HAVE LEFT THAT "PLACE" AND I NEVER WILL NEVER GO BACK!
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   10-07-2006, 8:10 AM
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I really like this one. You've captured the emotions beautifully
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   10-07-2006, 11:45 PM
Stacye is not online. Last active: 10/14/2006 5:18:08 AM Stacye



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Thank you ya'll, Im glad u liked it that came straight from the heart.  At a time when we were fighting and pissed.  Things are still rocky, im just learning how to control my emotions that seem to want to control me and let me run away with myself. 

Your emotions are one of the only things that we do have control of

When we dont control them they can contol us.

Thanks for your replies

Stacye:-)


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   10-10-2006, 7:58 PM
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Wow, Stacye... It's been a minute... I see you came back with the heat, tho... Nice Write...

One Luv


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   10-11-2006, 9:44 PM
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Thank you Honey

You know how sometimes you have to go thru a situation first before you can bring it out into poetry.  Ive been gone a moment but I am back with some good thoughts and visions.  Goin thru a love jones is somethin else.  But Im glad to see that I was missed.

One love

Stacye


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   10-12-2006, 9:59 AM
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You're Welcome Stacye...

I know exactly what you mean... Situations bring about good poetry... You've been missed and thanks for comin back and droppin your thoughts and visions on us...

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   10-12-2006, 10:47 AM
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love is a liquid situation. cracks in the foundation, it slowly slips away. things get too heated, it dissapates. too cold it freezes in place. think of your bond as a cup that needs to be replenished daily, or else it stagnates. before you put anything else in there, make sure that cup holds water. feel me?
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   10-13-2006, 7:41 AM
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I feel you williweed.  Sometimes you want to add to that cup, when the water drys out.  There is nothing left and you keep adding to a dried out well.  I say if its meant to be yours it will come back.  Its just hell trying to back out of a situation that you cannot control.  One thing Ive learned is the only thing in life you have control is is your life.  Never think you can try to control a man.  He makes his own descions and sometimes it hurts, but thats life and love wrapped.

One love

Stacye


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