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   10-11-2006, 6:54 AM
williweed is not online. Last active: 10/14/2006 6:32:18 PM williweed

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Spent shells and ashes
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on a long dark country road

all alone

walking

off up in the forest

hear the hell hounds barking

stalking my every step

coughing with every breath

caution

im lost and

im hearing footsteps

in the darkness

regardless

keeping my pace

keeping my faith

because if not

my life is a waist

cant replace the *** ups

cant get back the lost chances

they spent shells and ashes

let me ball till im blasted

when they lay me in the casket

label me a lucky ***

took my tragics

and crafted classics


change nothin...............nothin ever change
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   10-11-2006, 9:14 AM
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Re: Spent shells and ashes
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I like WilliWeed...
The Universe operates through dynamic Exchange....Giving & Receiving

I'm a student of this same truth
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   10-11-2006, 3:29 PM
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Re: Spent shells and ashes
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Is this a poem or freestyle. I like it
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   10-11-2006, 8:00 PM
williweed is not online. Last active: 10/14/2006 6:32:18 PM williweed

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thanks folks, just a lil somethin i wrote a while back
change nothin...............nothin ever change
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   10-11-2006, 9:46 PM
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I liked it i didnt want it to end so quickly though

Stacye


Maintain balance in life. Nothing in excess and extreme is never good. Balance.
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