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   10-04-2006, 8:32 AM
mzmiracal is online. Last active: 10/13/2006 6:59:13 AM mzmiracal



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i started writing about u today the longest poem i ever wrote and i ran low on my ink i started tellin of how me met and how we fell in love tell about the walks in the park and how we just shared a sweet tender hug and as i started to tell about how we feel apart and how the doubt entered my heart the ink ran out,the pen went dead and i realized all this love i thougt i was feeling for u was just that...dry i was beginning to tell of the lies, cheating and the living hell that we were goin through as the story started to unfold it seems as if my pen gave way and said JUST GO TO HELL i was beginning to tell of allthe pain all the agony we go through tell of the true shyt that i really sat through then it was like my pen said fu_cc that shyt you wont waste my ink you got a better story to tell that was my relief i was writing a poem about us today the longest poem i ever wrote but i stopped...half ass through it all i thought of something... that wont waste my ink
when i make u rain...baby it pours
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   10-04-2006, 8:47 AM
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I really like that

that shyt is tight

I really like

the ink ran out,the pen went dead and i realized all this love i thougt i was feeling for u was just that...dry


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   10-04-2006, 10:13 PM
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Go head mzmiracal. I like what you say once more.
Do unto others as you would have them to do unto you.

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   10-05-2006, 1:31 PM
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I just had to let you know, that this poem is the best I've read on this site.  You just summed it all up beautifully.  You're right, writing that stuff down was just a waste of ink. 

I like it when you said "like my pen said fu_cc that shyt you wont waste my ink..."

I absolutely loved it, once again I have been touched by your poetry.

That poem was the shyt!!!!!!!!!!!


LOVE DON’T LOVE ME THE WAY THAT I LOVE LOVE

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   10-05-2006, 2:23 PM
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always enjoyed mzMir . . .

"i'm an Orange Moon, reflecting the light of the sun" ~Ceily E. Badu
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   10-08-2006, 6:28 PM
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 Onceandagain wrote:

I just had to let you know, that this poem is the best I've read on this site.  You just summed it all up beautifully.  You're right, writing that stuff down was just a waste of ink. 

I like it when you said "like my pen said fu_cc that shyt you wont waste my ink..."

I absolutely loved it, once again I have been touched by your poetry.

That poem was the shyt!!!!!!!!!!!

well thank you very much that means a lot and i enjoyed everybody feedback and i look forward to future feedback from u


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   10-09-2006, 7:12 AM
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Tis poem is Tight
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